|Reviews for Separated Siblings|
| Ski Aer 3/17/07 . chapter 2
| Ms Urania 4/3/02 . chapter 1
I like the way this has started and can't wait to see what happens next.
The only constructive criticism I can give is that it needs a little more description and it could be paced better, as I felt that the ending of the first chapter was a little rushed. Otherwise, this is pretty good!