yea...that's jus kewl...^^ nice scene and junk, course due to the title ya couldn't of had a poem that led ppl up, guessin at it...nvm that, tho, too many clues in da poem, so wouldn't matter...my how I ramble on! ^_^ Nice description

This is a very very creative peice. I like the artistic irony. Perfect masquerade with your reader. I like to leave a unspoken theme like you have herein. This peice leaves me satisfied that I understand it simple points through realization of what it hides. I have written 2 peices about art on the site (Rica's Art, and I Paint Fat People), take a look if you'd like. I think we write similarly from the sample of your work that I just read.

-nervetrigger

this is well written. i would change the line "the dress is not quite right" because it's not very descriptive. you could also consider cutting out the last two paragraphs. you depicted the immobility of the figures on the canvas well. in general, well done : )