you don't write bad poetry. this is good. very deep and well thought out. :-) go brit!

*pokepoke* mmkay fess up who is this about? *wary eye* ok fine be that way. oh oh oh can i use this for a song bb my very good freind who i have always looked out for. please?

No way, I don't think you're crazy; that was excellent! Hey, midnight poetry is always the best stuff. LOL okay not ALWAYS, but in this case it certainly was! Some of my more meaningful poetry was written at ridiculous hours of the night, you know--back to you, though. This really touched my heart because I really sort of know how this is, and the songlike quality (the 'chorus' kind of part, I mean) put a certain well...I don't know, but I really loved this. Don't be so ** yourself, you're a good poet, it would seem. Now I have to check out some more stuff. Bwaha. ;) Keep up the great work! ~MJ