oh yes. been there! am there!gaaah! well, kinda. still, nice to see reality condensed into poetry, makes it easier to cope with somehow. thanks very much!Who did ya pick? :P

as always, nice work. definitely a subject which many people can relate to

*waves hand spastically* I've been there! Me, me! I have been there! _ It a'int fun either! I hope everything got sorted out.

I think this poem has had the best rhythm so far. This was a very good topic to write on, and you did so very well.

Sarah

Oh wow, I'm totally there. I'm in a situation that really fits this poem...very, very nice. The angst here is great:

"An endless vortex of scrambled will

The like I've never felt."

Oh man...that's really powerful. I like this quite a bit!

This sounds VERY much like what I was feeling at a certain time in my life - you'll never guess when - yup, the summer of 2001! I'm not sure if this is what you were trying to get across, but to me, it sounds like you're stuck between two certain someones... maybe because this is what was going on with me - yes, in the summer of 2001. -haley

Once again another good poem, I do like your writing. Thank you so much for the reviews. And to answer your question, the poem in my profile is actually a song by a band named Guster. Once again thanks, and great work with your writing.