 Dark-BlueDeep 2003-05-21 . chapter 1(Little speechless gasp) You are, so very very good at what you do. |
 Aviendha19 2003-01-03 . chapter 1ah well, i almost guessed it right (:
excellent riddles, excellent. i love this line, its so poetic "i am often wasted, though to death i hold the key." my gosh, that is so good. youre an excellent poet. Thanks for reading my stuff, reviews are always welcome
Lorraine |
 Rose of Dresden 2002-11-16 . chapter 1ah! i love the rhythmn in these! the second is my favorite, i don't know. hehe, regicide. ah, sorry. anyway, i love how you can rhyme so well! |
 Jade6 2002-05-09 . chapter 1Oh - kind of creepy but I like it... I really like some of the questions your poem inspires... it makes you think twice... great work...
I really like the first two lines in your second stanza... very powerful and I can so relate - when I took philosophy last year it left me feeling so confused and small... again great poem! |
 Spyre 2002-04-22 . chapter 1 -=blink=-
Well, I adore this.
This is going on my faves.
-=nod, does a li'l dance=-
Ooooh, yeah.
Great work!
as ever:
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