That was so sad and beautiful. Very powerful!

A coma?

... beautiful poem.

~chord

Melikies.

ah-

i wish i had something intelligent to say. i really do

this poem feels like a symphony, and thats the only thing i can think of to say. i feel like crying too

hopkins makes me want to bite my fist.

indefinately this is also exsisting,

oh so sad... but powerful... truly touching...

I love the diversity of your poems... you cover so much and don't get stuck on the same topic...

I like this poem... it hits the heart... it is so real...

Poignant as one can get.
Again, your pacing is exact,
purposeful and very drawing.
I knew it was her father
the stanza before you reveal
it... and I think that's what's
great about it.

as ever:
s p y r e