Oh wow! I love this poem, it's very though provoking.
'Since when was silence so loud?
And since when was expression so ignored?' True, very true.
tarnished oversoul 2002-04-02 . chapter 1
oh, what a beautiful free verse poem- you should stick to those as your rhyming ones, though beautiful and metaphoric are a little choppy- I really like this one though(sometimes this is me, usually when i'm in the angtsy poet mood.)
Queen of Quite A Lot 2002-03-21 . chapter 1
Wow, that was some really awesome writing, please continue, that was great!