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| Zenyth Lee 2003-02-11 ch 1,  | abusewow...i thought i was the only one who felt that way...i like your poem, it really captures that crappy feeling of living a "double life" cheerful on the outside, but just a big mess on the inside...keep writing... p.s. you have a thing for hermoine/snape stories, don't you? hehehe...me and my obtuse observations... |
| Broadwaypoetess *LaBloodyRo... 2002-11-16 ch 1, | abuseHey, nice poem. A know a few girls who we called "the prodidgy kids" (my spelling sucks, you can tell I'm not one of them) They got perfect all 90+ averages. Makes ya think, don't it? |
| Michelle 2002-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnd can I borrow this to put in my room and locker? Please? I really love this poem and don't want to lose it. |
| Michelle 2002-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my God, you have *no* idea how perfectly this poem describes me. Everyone thinks I have a perfect life, but it's really not perfect at all. And you've really captured the essence of what it is like to be one of those "unlucky few", as you put it. Wow. I'm stunned. That's incredible. |
| X 2002-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abusegood poem love it kinda sounds a little like me but hey well keep it up |
| Miracle Vedilien 2002-04-07 ch 1, | abuse::gasp:: That sounds remarkably... familiar... Kinda like me. *Exactly* like me. Maybe what you were saying earlier? Loved it! I couldn't express that better myself. -Miracle [the goody-two-shoes(= ] |
| HSnape 2002-04-06 ch 1, | abusei never would have known...if you ever need to talk..you know where i am (((((hugs))))) |
| Who cares? Not me! 2002-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseSounds like you actually think quite highly of yourself. Nobody has perfect friends and the problems you speak of, I have to say everyone has them. Not just you. This sounds more like a story than a poem. |
| Richard Edwards 2002-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, I think the poem is great. The none rhyming pattern brings out the essence of the subject. I feel like a part of you, just from reading these strong felt words of passion. I can see that an emotion has burried itself into your life, and you are fighting to be rid of it. I believe this emotion could be called, denial. I think you need to realise what has caused you to write these lines, and fix it. |