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| iliveinadreamworld 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseYou are so talented at writing songs. I wish I could write as well! |
| OMG Ish Luff 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI could see someone famous singing this song. I just kinda ignored the 1 to 3 thing but still, it was awsome! |
| Ice Dagger 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseWhere's verse two?Other than that, I love the rhyme scheme, and you use simple diction to really land a good right hook in the jaw of your reader. Beautifully written and I really hope I hear it someday. |
| chewing GUM 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseyou skipped from verse 1 to verse 3, and, IMHO, this sucks. |
| Trapped-Bird 2003-06-09 ch 1, | abuseHey! this is really good like all your other songs ^-^ the only thing that gets to me is the Bridge which has an odd resemblance to Bye,Bye,Bye by N'Sync |
2002-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abusei thought it was gay. ur all ** eaters |
| Pretty Waste 2001-05-09 ch 1, | abusewow, That wwas really good |
| Jalin Muhammud Jackson 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse Now this song is the jam! I see a combination of pop/R&B here. Mia definitely has some TALENT! I could just picture Whitney Houston or Faith Evans singing this! I should send this one to my ex! Hahaha! |
| the assmaster 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse this cupcake kicked **, its a lot like that new stuff that be coming out... sounds like something destiny's child would write, and just as good. ANd this is my type of cupcake. I liked this song. |
| Steph 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abusecool song. i lov ur lyrics in the songs u write. theyre awesome! |