Verse 2 was either missed or put as Verse 3. This is a good song. I can imagine a band singing it.

Verse 2 was either missed, or you put Verse 2 as Verse 3. It's a great song. I can imagine it being sung at a concert or the like. This would be a good band song.

I love the song. When I was singing it to myself, I sung it as a pop song is that how it's supposed to be sung.

Love this, too. You're good.

You are so talented at writing songs. I wish I could write as well!

I could see someone famous singing this song. I just kinda ignored the 1 to 3 thing but still, it was awsome!

Where's verse two?Other than that, I love the rhyme scheme, and you use simple diction to really land a good right hook in the jaw of your reader. Beautifully written and I really hope I hear it someday.

you skipped from verse 1 to verse 3, and, IMHO, this sucks.

Hey! this is really good like all your other songs - the only thing that gets to me is the Bridge which has an odd resemblance to Bye,Bye,Bye by N'Sync

i thought it was gay. ur all pussy eaters

wow, That wwas really good

Now this song is the jam! I see a combination of pop/R&B here. Mia definitely has some TALENT! I could just picture Whitney Houston or Faith Evans singing this! I should send this one to my ex! Hahaha!

this cupcake kicked ass, its a lot like that new stuff that be coming out... sounds like something destiny's child would write, and just as good.

ANd this is my type of cupcake. I liked this song.

cool song. i lov ur lyrics in the songs u write. theyre awesome!