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| mexxdbest 2008-04-22 ch 16, anon. | abuseThis is a damn ridiculous story..now all the guys have just fallen for her...how could it be more ridiculous...although I admit it was fun reading it.. The story just seem too fictional I guess...without doin' anything everybody just seem to fall for her and do you have to describe the kissing scenes so vividly cuz it creeps me out and it feels so gross* to read it...err..i hope that the succeeding chapters cud be less explicit in a way.. |
| Alenor 2008-02-05 ch 29,  | abuseheya, this is a good story. cya later ~ Alenor |
| chocolatechipash 2007-12-19 ch 2, | abuseyou have a lot of grammatical errors, and its making it really hard for me to read. i suggest you find a beta to help or you do a re-write. assuming english is your second language, it's a really good effort. |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abusehello! i absolutely love this story! cant believe i passed it off the first time i saw it! 10/10! |
| nikkicole 2007-07-14 ch 29, | abuseI REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY! ITS SO GOOD! great job! i love everything about it! it got me totally hooked!! |
| Victoria 2007-03-02 ch 28, anon. | abusei would actually want to see a sequel of this if you can. it sounds pretty interesting if there was a sequel between Mikki and Chikan. and that way we can know what's been going on with Kinchi and Rerina, you know? |
| siddika 2007-01-31 ch 28, | abuseGOOD JOB. |
| atreyu love 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseinteresting |
| punkr0ckchck 2006-12-05 ch 6, | abuserotflmao omg!lmao lol lol lol this is now my favorite humor story lol i have not laughed that hard from 1 chapter out of a stary in my life. XD |
| SimplySweetnSour 2006-08-15 ch 29, | abuseall of these stories sound so good. i think you should write the legend of rain first. :D |
| SimplySweetnSour 2006-08-15 ch 19, | abusethis chapter is so funny. chikan is having such a blast. :D |
| naivete chica 2006-06-27 ch 28, | abusehey! I just reread this story again! This is, and always has been, hilarious and amazing and sweet and touching! I enjoyed rereading this so much. ^^ I dun know wat I`d do without your fics to read Yisa. I hope you write a new fic soon! Heh.. but I dun understand this part. Rerina and Anii make a pact to both become friends with Kiyu, and to help her with her love story. But nothing like that ever occured afterwards. Did u forget, or is that wat u intended? ~ alice |
| FadedWhispers 2006-06-08 ch 5, | abuseThis story is great! But just watch da grama here and there... :):):):) |
| Southern Siren 2006-04-08 ch 4, | abusegreat job! i really like this story... maybe better than 2 hearts! nah... but on the cost of the house $140,9 isn't really realistic yeah i don't know if someone's mentioned it yet but 1,400,9 is better! so sry to nitpick for a sec but i really do like it so far! i'll review at the end! |
| SimplySweetnSour 2006-03-21 ch 28, | abuseoh my. what a sweet ending. everybody wins right? well, except vivi of course. poor girl, being rejected and all. can't wait till you update 2 HEARTS!may your muse be kind to youLinda |