|Reviews for Endless Waltz|
| crispybea 9/30/05 . chapter 1
WOW. really hectic poem. it really ended in a very unexpected twist. nice. go on keep writing!
| Shiroi Ryuu 8/7/04 . chapter 1
Whoa. It's... beautiful. My insides just jumped at the last line.
| AVIGON 7/10/03 . chapter 1
A couple of verses in the middle struck me as a bit out of tune with the rest of the poem, but it didn't bother me so much because I really liked how managed to create a mood like that.
"My eternal torment, my dance with the knife" is definitely the best verse I've read today.
| Davie Glass 4/22/03 . chapter 1
wow i really like this best parts the knife, but it wouldn't have made sense with a person there the knife just fits better lol
| Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 3/9/03 . chapter 1
Some people say you should stick to songs, while others say you should stick to poetry. I say stay with both. Any good poem can become a song, and most good songs are poetry. I actually saw this ending coming, believe it or not. If I was more of a poet than novelist, I'm sure I'd write things like this. My poetry's horrible about 90% of the time. I love the imagery, very beautiful and straightforward.
| Beyond The Pale 12/11/02 . chapter 1
Yay, poetry! Its not pansy love poetry like me tho. ANyways, I love the twist at the end, and it all flows so well. A masterpiece
| passing on pixydust outgrown 11/1/02 . chapter 1
wow, not what you expect, i like it though.
very poignant and painful
| unknown 8/24/02 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful, it made me cry, cuz I can completely identify... I printed it up and now I'm going to become a stalker and put it in my binder and keep it forever and ever but at least I won't be the annoying kind of stalker and bug you forever. N e hoo, bye!
| Asagao 8/10/02 . chapter 1
*is in love* I can completely id with that...
Sorry 'bout that last IM conversation... it sucked (do you hate me?)
| parodi 6/30/02 . chapter 1
I am very emotionally touched. I'm writing a review for all your songs. You have a great quality of greatness.
| adfasdf 6/1/02 . chapter 1
Whoa... Somehow, I'm confused by it though ''' I think it's just because I'm reviewing this at ten at night, with very little sleep... Good job on the rhymes though! I didn't expect the ending
| Honey Kitten 5/22/02 . chapter 1
Oh wow do I ever like this one! It's going on my favourites list. Don't know what else I can say except it's really good...
| Darkangel-mysticat 5/5/02 . chapter 1
Geeze, I like it; nice twist at the end. *Shivers* like I said, I like! _
| fuschia 4/23/02 . chapter 1
dude, this is good. short, yet poignant. thanks 4 the comment by the way, ur right, I shouldn't force the rhyme.
| That Firefly Chick 4/21/02 . chapter 1
Gah. When I saw the title, the first thing that came into my mind was, 'GUNDAM WING!'. Then I snapped out of my state of anime-obsession long enough to read this. I like it. Very dark and angst-filled. Nice job.