This has great imagery for such a short poem. It is inspiring. Peace.

Wow, i don't really understand it but i love it. It's great. *scratching my head* I wish I got it cause it souds and feels awesome. Like a burst of poetic energy. Well keep writing.

Oo wow. :) Were the melting snow and drying puddle actually meant to stand for the passing of a storm? Because, well, when an actual storm passes the puddles from rain dry, and snow from blizzards melts...well, that's how I took it to mean! Very symbolic/metaphorical, but in a good, understandable way. I really love this one now that I've thought about it...I'm so glad you posted your poetry! ~MJ