Reviews for Essylit Chronicles

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Celtic Dancer 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseI'm usually a fan of all things strange, but this just didn't do it for me. I'm sorry, and I don't mean to sound mean or anything, but I am not inclined to move on to the next chapter at all. The story itself is an interesting idea, at least, the bit of the story that I've read. The writing, though, and the lack of sentence structure I don't think I can deal with. There's too much that forces me to stop and mentally correct; I can't get into the story at all. Again, try not to see this as a scathing "you're awful" review, because that is not what is intended at all. Happy writing
KaronePrincess 2007-11-13 ch 20,	abusehello, the story is so GREAT! I love everything in it: the charactors, writing style, the comedy. I love comedy! And I love heroine! Thanks for writing the excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck with more stories. Thanks, KaronePrincess
Karasuwater 2007-04-12 ch 1,	abusei LOVE THIS STORY. ;) it made me happy and daydreamy...
BluenDye 2005-12-25 ch 1,	abuseThis story is halrious!
blu`spiit 2005-07-09 ch 20, anon.	abusewow i jus finished reading this story and its really good!! thumbs up good joB done!! hahah kai is so cute i wish i had a lil brother like that cept less clingy ^_^i hope that one day u'll end up making a sequel
MegumiReisui 2005-03-25 ch 20,	abuseawsome :)
Rynnal 2005-02-10 ch 20, anon.	abuseAfter spending half a year trying to find this story again. I finally found it, and I still think it's awesome! ^^Now, off to read your other story thingies. ^^
fallen-shinobi 2004-11-23 ch 20,	abuse>_< it's pure kawaiines! oh i so love kai! he's mine! so back of! puppy dog eyes! your story is pure kawainess!
taga-ilog 2004-11-01 ch 20,	abusewahahahahahahahahaha!! this story is so funny!! wahahahahahahaha!! wait.. why is it finished already? why? noh...! this cannot be.. this cannot be... poutpout* anyway.. ahmm.. funny story..
Cheetah Smith 2004-08-13 ch 20,	abuseAh, what a wonderfully charming story...And I had predicted that Essylit and Calvin would fall in love, and they did. Which made me smile, because, well, I'm a sap. Essylit was a very charming and boisterous heroine. Though, I thought the plot was a tad weak, and perhaps there could've been more chapters/episodes to develop the story better and to have more character development. But that's alright. William was actually my favorite character, just because he was a lovable fatherly mentor type. Kai is adorable, and Calvin made me laugh. Overall, I'd say that the humor of the story is what made me like it so much. In short, it's bloody damn good! ^^ -Cheetah Smith
Angel-in-a-dark-corner 2004-07-01 ch 20,	abuseI loved it I want it to be amovie and it would be so cool. You are even better then some people with actual books, please write a second it was great!
Katie 2004-06-28 ch 20, anon.	abuseWHOA, that was the BEST story I have ever read. I was absolutely hooked on it!! I couldn't stop reading it. It was a very emotional story. I laughed and cried (which doesn't happen a lot). I wish I could write like you. Thanks for the story. I really enjoyed reading it. signed, Katie
Protectress476 2004-06-19 ch 20, anon.	abusethat story is awesome! you should write a sequel! i cant think of any criticism at all for it..strange thing for me,lol.
evil-pillow 2004-06-14 ch 19,	abusesry i just relized this but shouldn't the epilouge be the last chapter and then the epilauge would be what happens after the last chapter as in: epilouge: 'after essylit's death defying return she and calvan got married and had two sweet children and everyone lived happily ever after'...except longer than that...and then if you do a series then you start off from the end of the epilouge...sry if you don't want to write ANOTHER epilouge for this story that just caught my eye after reading this story a few times...great story! please make a series!please?purty pwease?purty pwease with a few cherries on top?
evil-pillow 2004-05-22 ch 20,	abusehey!this is a REALLY good story!i would REALLY like it if you could put up a secuil(can't spell)or somehting and if you do could you PLEASE start from the ending of essylit chronicles?i for some reason don't like it whenever people start it like 10 years later because i just feel as if i missed something in the story because there is ususally new charecters and the old charecters have been for a long time since dead.sry about my lecture.but this story is so good!^__^ this is the 3rd time i have read it!

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