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Sahir 2008-12-21 . chapter 3
Is this meant to be repeated after several drinks? I can imagine the fun that would erupt from that exercise!
Sahir 2008-12-21 . chapter 24
I could write the same of my home state Wyoming, yet few people could possibly relate. It matters not where you go after your childhood, there's always a place that will stick in your heart as your "home". For me it is Wyoming, even though it has been decades since I've lived there. Shoot, I've been in Maryland longer than I was ever in Wyoming, yet I consider Wyoming as my home. If you ever leave Maryland, it will always be in your heart.
Sahir 2008-12-21 . chapter 26
Wasn't so hard to get online here after a bit of searching. Not sure what a good review should be, but wanted to say something about this piece. I do like it yes. Nice way to equate a closeness of a friend with sisterhood. I was just talking to one of my dear friends this evening and called him my "Indian brother from another mother" - the same thing you say here!

For some reason I expected to see crazy flowery words (I've not read any of your work before, yet I just love the way you talk in person and the words you use). Instead I see very down-to-Earth powerful words that really describe the emotions well. I've come to learn in my writings that simple is better. To be more accessable by most folks, it is best to use more common words. Nicely done.

Gosh - my first review. Gonna have to read some others!
deb 2003-09-24 . chapter 22
very powerful and clearly imaged, it's also a clear expression of your feelings.

goddess willing, it will be well recieved and viewed as just that expression, not as a thing of malice. Which it clearly is not.
Taunton 2003-02-02 . chapter 3
It took me a while to find this one, I had forgotten the title. But you slick philosopher you, I now had the answer to one of my life's great mysteries. What happened to all the booze in my bar? Budda.
Taunton 2003-02-02 . chapter 6
I don't know why you thought I wouldn't like this. It is good. I mean really very good. How long did it take you? Was it one of those that just exploded out of you? or...was it a lenghty labor, like fine wine, taken in sips. I was touched in just the reading. Nice job Kate. Budda.
Shade Paradox 2003-01-03 . chapter 19
Treat women as best as you can.
And you might not get your butt kicked.
Eep.
2002-12-20 . chapter 1
This poem gives a real meaning to what poetry really is. Pick up the pen and keep on writing!
Ellerfru 2002-12-19 . chapter 19
keep writing!
Shade Paradox 2002-11-20 . chapter 18
Some people work too little
Other people work too much
I like your poetry, tis true
Keep up the good work and such
Shade Paradox 2002-11-20 . chapter 17
Dang it. My nonsensical (is that a word) reviews don't work with these.
Shade Paradox 2002-11-20 . chapter 16
No words worthy of it. Just reminds me of my grandfathers as well.
Shade Paradox 2002-11-20 . chapter 15
I ponder what to say and find the words do not come. Its not because it's unworthy of words. Just works that way sometimes.
Shade Paradox 2002-11-20 . chapter 14
"And I say to myself,
What a wonderful world."
Shade Paradox 2002-11-20 . chapter 13
I often look up into the sky.
And I wonder. I wonder why?
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