   azncandyfairy 2002-04-07 . chapter 5wow, that was GOOD...and a bit scary, i might have nightmares, im gonna check your otha stories....bye! |
 Alethia 2002-04-06 . chapter 5Yay! The good guys win! Great ending to a great story. |
 Kimberly Michelle 2002-04-05 . chapter 4It's really good! what does mike look like anyway? if you already mentioned it in your story sorry, I foget. hehe. Wirte more soon! |
| Kimberly Michelle 2002-04-05 . chapter 1 great start so far, this guy is nuts! |
| Alethia 2002-03-29 . chapter 4 Oh, I hope she doesn't die.
Great chapter, as always. |
 Zero Self Esteem 2002-03-24 . chapter 2Very interesting concept...keep writing. ^_^ |
| Alethia 2002-03-24 . chapter 2 Oh, poor Ruby! Why is this guy doing this?
Great story so far. |
 Forsaken Innocence 2002-03-24 . chapter 1Wow...first-class freaky!!! |
| Alethia 2002-03-24 . chapter 1 I think it's a good start. I'd like to see more of it soon. |
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