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| Reviews for The Outcasts of Daneswe |
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   Irides 11/18/02 . chapter 1Okay. Story was too quick. Slow things down. (sounds wierd editing my own story) Put things in detail. Though by now it might be around 20 pages after that, but still. Have fun. Sloooow the thing doooooooown. |
| Uriko 5/20/02 . chapter 1 that was a GREAT story gave me a lot of background for when they enter the other story! which way will FANTASIC know it! anyway back ta matchin couplefer me! a vry talented writer! |
| Ink Splotches 5/10/02 . chapter 1 wow...lots of feeling... |
| silverquill 5/7/02 . chapter 1 nice story, but the end was kind of abrupt. |
| Mika-cha 4/1/02 . chapter 1 Wheeeeeeee! Dat was so good nee-chan! Have another excerpt ready, ne? The murder was so nice and murdery, too. lol Very descriptive, too! - Cya later, nee-chan! Mika |
