I really liked this one, it sorta reminds me of a very close guy friend of mine that I seem to have fallen for... It's different, of course, but he comes to mind when I read it. Very well written and interesting concept!

this is such a nice poem! keep writing

I had to laugh! I thought of my very first bf when I read this. Not that I did what the poem said, but rather what he did! I am actually smiling at the memory now! Godd work.

Just a real quick question...was this about a teacher? I wasn't real sure but that is what popped into my head after you wrote 'Days after I went into your class'.

Anyway, wonderful poem. It flowed very smoothly, no real big stop or blemishes. I thought you did a very nice job. It has a lot of feeling and the rhyiming is very nice.

Lou, that was really pretty. Is it based on real events or something you just wrote to write? If real, I have to know, who?