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| Cinaed Born Of Fire 2004-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the imagery and emotion in this poem, although some of the punctuation puzzled me a bit. There were some commas in places I wouldn't have put them. Oh well, artistic license. It was a lovely poem. Well done. ~Cinaed |