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| Suzanne Star 2002-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so nice. I really like it, I guess thats probably 'cause it really reminds me of someone. "He looked into her eyes And knew she’d always care" That's kinda the way I hope he felt, even though it was me leaving rather than he. Whatever, its a great poem. I liked it alot. |
| Calvin Wong 2002-04-01 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds rather hopeful, actually. I'm surprised. :) I like the interplay between the two characters, while I don't know who they are, it came out quite good for scribbling over the phone. :) |
| the laughing ghost 2002-03-30 ch 1, | abuseas always I love your poetry. I keep checking out your file for new poems, this was very well written. It was moving too (dramatic sob). Please allow me to ask that for a review on my new poems please please !!! |