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| Elen-tari 2002-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're mystical mind-controlling powers have prompted me to send you a review. My comments: WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kudos to you for a super beginning and hope to see more! Good luck!! |
| rlfieno 2002-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseI love it! I'm reviewing it!!! I also felt sorry for it cos it had no reviews already. Except that isn't the right word, quite, because that kind of makes it look like I have some sort of pity. And I do not pity anyone that can write as well as you can. I hate you for it, wah!!!!! It's your first non-fanfic I've read, and I have to say two things 1)I'm jealous as hell at your dialogue and description and 2)are you planning on being an author, because you're going to make a lot of money doing this. But for now, you'll have to make do with a raving Chris Martin pic. Hehe, the Vulcan mind-meld...loved that...and Gideon- what a gorgeous name... |