Aww... I'm sad that you've gone through such horrible times, but I hope writing it down makes you feel a little better.
Interesting suicide, if I may say so. Stabbing yourself through the wrist takes a lot more willpower than just slitting it. A lot more muscle and bone to pass through, yes O.o
Well written. Sad and depressive, but well written indeed. I liked the ending, hope I'm not being too morbid when I say that, but I understand it.
~Shada

That was amazing. Breathtaking. In a way I know what you mean.

wow...depressing. o-o; but, I like depressing things. 'twas very, very good.

This is really good! Or maybe I just think that because I'm often almost to the point of doing that myself...

Wow, Amb. That one is sad, you sure your okasies? lolz Well, mildly depressing side, I cried! :-P

Whoa! I truly hope you're feeling better now.

On the criticism side (in the Greek sense, not the "being negative" sense) I was waiting for the anger to explode, but your explanation of the dulling effects of depression makes this a more coherent piece of writing.

Another point is "Who is the narrator talking to?". An imaginary friend - always a good device, especially if the narrator and friend are clearly different but reach resolution (ie agree that suicide is the way forward) or like Fight Club, start off in agreement and end as separate entities. There could be a video cam, but perhaps a better device could be a mirror. You get to describe how you look, tears and how they move etc. Of course, these are all ways of answering "Why?" and seeing as you don't ask it, you can safely ignore all of the above.

Anyway, take care, and keep writing

sheesh, Amber.. That was really good and depressing. btw, i've read most of ur fics and i'll review them later cux i'm at school ..i'm not even s'pose to be on HERE..but, good work. love ya ,

Sharelle

you can scream now ! very dark very lonely ; hope its not too autobiographical , promise to call me b 4 u get this low again . U can use these real feelings 4 creativity tho and that is good .
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this is a really good story...for what it's about. i think you write really well.