| Reviews for death |
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a silenced revolution 3/18/07 . chapter 1That's amazing. The line "the song is over" is an incredibly powerful metaphor. "A wave of shocking silence carries me away" It's wonderful, dark and descriptive. I don't know what else to say. You've perfectly captured something as complex as death in seventeen syllables. Keep writing! |
Morwain 5/3/06 . chapter 1short and too the point but not lacking the nessacery desprictions |
Aquafied 4/30/06 . chapter 1depressing reallybut i am addicted to this (hah. if i tried to speak to you in german, you would be crying out of laughter really now, no need to have a mess up over that. gaga, crazy, whatever. just made me laugh) |
Kusje 4/30/06 . chapter 1Mm. I love the haiku's. I wrote like 1 Haiku, and it sucked.. |
boys kiss girls 4/29/06 . chapter 1beautiful. |
SinCorazon 4/7/06 . chapter 1"a wave of shocking silence" - that's exactly what I feel when I hear about someone I know who's died. |
Loup17 4/11/05 . chapter 1most people i know can't write a haiku to save their life, at least not a good one, yet you manage to pull it off JA PS that is DARK, next time capitilize the summary |
godawful teen-angst poetry 1/15/04 . chapter 1Ugh, this hits close to home...sorry, this is a bit hard for me to review. You've perfectly captured the essence of death...grief...sorry. This is...you're amazing. Sorry if this review makes little sense. lyv |
Tatterdemalion 11/15/03 . chapter 1Beautiful stuff. So simple to see what you mean, yet very moving all the same... |
Indecisive 11/9/03 . chapter 1Simple, but i guess very realistic! good on you! |
Emi Amara 11/8/03 . chapter 1hiya! cool, it makes me picture just a silent crowd. i'm wrong, aren't i? o well, better luck next time! good haiku! cya ) -winged girl |
agny 11/8/03 . chapter 1 You're a goth, aren't you? |
frugale 11/7/03 . chapter 1Good, breathtaking. |
Sun Chime 8/9/03 . chapter 1That's a really strange way of dying. Mystifying images form in your head. Beautiful. |
greenfroggies 7/8/03 . chapter 1WOW...and, um...more WOW! i love this, would you mind if i printed it out (with your name on of course) to stick on my bedroom wall? |