 Spyre 2002-04-22 . chapter 1This is brilliant, ingenius.
I adore this. This is going on my faves.
hehehe
It is!
It really is one long, sick humour joke.
Kinda says... "Figures."
One thing, though...
with this story, the LONG, unkempt
paragraphs really detract.
They're hard to follow.
I write the SAME exact way when it
comes to paragraphs like that, but
for people who haven't read it before,
it's really disorienting.
as ever:
s p y r e
PS... I think I'll just put you as a fave author... and put this and your waste musing as fave stories. Hmmm... :) KEEP IT UP! |