This is very sad.

last few lines are very deep and just so powerful...i can really picture this in my head...you have an amazing way with words...great job!! lots of love ~AllyCred~

good choice of words, i like it.*Lady Solitaire*

The last two lines are from the buffy musical once more with feeling! lol! Except instead of past it said path! Anyway the poem is great of course!

Very sad but in a good kind of way.

wow, such vivid images. your such a talented writer, please keep it up.

Aw, very sad. Very depressing, but very good.

this is a awesome poem! it's amazing the way that it's written. thank you for the review that you left on my story. i'm glad that you liked it. your writing is very cool.

Gosh that was beautiful...if you know what I mean, they way you wrtoe it not the topic. Ahh I'm confusing myself hehe. Im gonna read ur next 1

wow this is really kool

Wow... that's sad, but I can completely relate. Good job!!!

That's really good! I like it! (Thanks for the review!)

very good. it's how I feel most of the time :-(