really love the suspense and action. i'll keep reading when i ever have the time.

FREAKY!!!! But I like it, I'll read more after the holidays.

nice story...i like it....very interesting....do you like vampires and stuff like that?.....

p.s. thanks for the review.....

We should all have evil characters. I have mine and you got yours. By any chance do you type the fortunes on the fortune cookies?

I thought that vampires could go near holy artifacts but I suppose it's either 'cos he's a half-human or it's 'cos that's a hypocrite chruch.

Awwwww! So sad. Sorry.

Half-vampires? Huh! I got a few of 'em meself, though they like to be mortal like 'cos-- well, I don't exactly know why they're like that... Scept James... Anyway, very cool.

Not bad. Very enjoyable.

wow good story u have there so far, please finish it up or have more chapters out its really interesting comparing to the others. :P

Really exciting story! I like the way you describe everything. I thought the language you invented did the job well and is a welcome break from the much abused latin, french, hebrew etc. I'll be bacxk for the rest later.

hope you don't mind, but i didn't read the story. i just wanted to see all the quotes on the top--they're AWESOME!! are they original? if the quotes are that good, i might just take some time and actually read all that's beneath it.

Ooo...Dimitri's REal evil..oooo...kew...but are you sure he's human..I mean, he really don't act like it...wait, o, he's Darcus's bro...dang..how'd I let that slip...um...ok..yea..he's still Danny's uncle..so...um... Continue with the fic, tis goood

ok, the dude's a vampire, he's already dead

Ya! His new found father is now newly evil! Yaaa! They're all DOOMED!! YA!!! ^_^

heh...Nurse Joy, pokemon, ya
k, so the Vampire Leader is Danny's father..lala, and Danny's probably gonna fight him to save some ppl...or somethin