I liked it, it sounded Shakespear-ish. (I don't know how to spell his name x.x)

I don't know what to say. I'm slowly working my way across your poetry. this one is just so strong and vibrant in its words. I love it! One of the best poems I've come across.

Interesting! Good idea! I am impressed! You have a way w/ words! Bravo!

Whiro