it's been so long since i've read a nice, sappy, heartfelt mxm story. i must have missed this one. it's just so aw. cute, and i love the plot, twisted. And every girl totally digs the knight in shining armour business, so well done.

I just took the most amazing password retrieving test ever, but your story tops the amazingness. I absolutely LOVED it!

This is the third or fourth time I've read Black Phoenix (the first time was at least a year ago), and each time it just gets better and better.

I can say with utter honesty that I absolutely love this story. The characters are so real and captivating, and you weave the plot seamlessly with the emotions. The psychological aspects are brilliantly effective as well, and add a depth to the story that lifts it above and beyond.

I just want to thank you, profusely, for writing Black Phoenix. It is (and you are) one of a kind.

Absolutely loved it! Great job! It was dark in a very realistic and believable way, with out being overly angsty or dramatic.

That...really brought tears to my eyes. I can't even begin to explain how happy you've made me by writing this. I really loved the characters. It was such a great ending too. All in all, I'd say that this is one of the most wonderful things I've ever read.

There were definitely tears in my eyes when I was reading this. *sniff* It's such a sweet story. And I'm glad syrian didn't die.

That was terrific! Really nice ending. I can't stop smiling!

'Then the police open fired on my father. He had a weapon, he had used it, and they had no choice...His body jerked from every impact as if he was dancing some horrific dance...'Right about here I realized that I was shouting 'Yay!' all through the paragraph.

Hihi^^ Sorry for the late review. Well, the story's really interesting and I egt to see alot of views and feelings from the chracter and you actually did it quiet well^^ I could feel like when he's feeling yet he's quiet numb but sometimes I have to re-read some of the sentences then only I'll go Aw or Ohh or gasp and the part I love most is in the abandone warehouse. It's so intense, sickning =P, suspicious, saw a new light in some characters and answers answered^^ I was so absorb init I actually cried, gasp and was Aww come on and all those stuff... yeah...>.> and I wonder who's fault is it..=P hehehe

Now is the letter part, It's so freakin' sad. You made me cry at the end again... It's so saddening and really depressing! How could you! atleast we have a really better ending,ne?^^ YES!! ^^ hehe. well, it's really late over here^^ I'll be reading the last chapter tomorrow!Can't wait. The suspends eating me but I feel like a dead fish right now...=P Ciaoz^^

beautiful! absolutely wonderful, this is one of the best stories i've ever read! It was so absolutely perfect, there's absolutely nothing to be changed... I know i'm reviewing late, but... heh. Wonderful! I want to read this over and over again, it's so perfect! You are one of the best authoresses ever. Keep it up. :) Congratulations! And thank you very much for a great read. This was wonderful.

oh, this chapter was really nice! Wonderful, and the descriptions are just perfect... your story should be turned into a book. XDDKeep it up! Cliffhanger...Must read... more... Wai...

Wonderful story. You had me hooked from the very first chapter and I couldn't stop reading! Great job.

...I'm not sure whether to cry, laugh, smile or do all at once.That was one of the most beautiful stories I've read yet on fictionpress, or any other online site actually.Probably even in books, as well.I truly enjoyed reading this, and I have been reading this non-stop whenever I get home from school or have extra time on my hands.Great story, I must compliment and thank you for writing it, as well as completing it.This is indefinitly going on my favourites list.-Shadow

Oh, **! I'm crying! I NEVER cry! But now, I can't help it. This story is so beautiful!

I've read this story like three times I think. I absolutely ** love it. Rian's by **. :p