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Gentle. Edge. 2008-07-25 ch 1,	abuseYou make the actual story seem like a phony and truthfully, I liked how you did it. Lol. I can't wait to read your version of Cinderella :)
caramellxkissx 2008-07-25 ch 83,	abusei got in so much trouble for reading this instead of sleeping at night! I absolutely loved it, and am unhappily waiting for the sequel to start? Wow, I can't believe you stuck with it for 5 years! As a reader, I think all that time and work really paid off, it was a great read. By far the longest sort of fiction I've yet to read online, do you ever think of making it into a book? Anyway, like I said, can't wait for that sequel!
A Long-Time Reader 2008-07-23 ch 82, anon.	abusePlease get this published. You'll probably have to split it up into multiple books, but it NEEDS to be published. Let's be honest, a lot of the stories on FictionPress that get a lot of reviews aren't great literature. But this? This is AMAZING. This is the ONLY story where everyone I know who's been on FictionPress has read it and liked it... and none of us told each other about it until we'd all found it. It's gotten to the point where when I find out that someone's heard of FictionPress, I EXPECT to hear them rave about this story. I've had it recommended to me more times than I can count, and all I can do is laugh and say I've already enjoyed it immensely. I come back and reread this story so much, I'm surprised I ever get anything done. And it's not a story you can read a chapter of each day and then come back - I go on reading BINGES where pretty much all I do for a few days is read it again. If I owned a real copy, it would be dog-eared and well-loved. So please, do publish it. And then announce it on FictionPress so we can all go buy it! I'll buy myself a copy and then start giving copies to everyone I know. Goodness knows the story is significantly better than a lot of the stuff that's published now.
Kairi95 2008-07-23 ch 50,	abuseok now... I'm 13 years old and i've been reading this story for 5 days now... It's friggin' 3:00 in the morning outside there's a storm with lightnings and all that included and i'm about to pee myself because they scare the hell out of me... i've got bags under my eyes and my vision is slightly blurred but i don't give a damn 'cause this story is soy fascinating that i can't stop reading it even if i don't want more!... God! i'm sure that later when someone enters to my room... they're going to find sleeping on the keyboard... ! this story is like a drug to me or something because i can't stop reading it! >.
Kiara 2008-07-22 ch 83, anon.	abuseHey there, I've actually just spent almost three days reading this story. At first I had stumbled upon it searching for something to take up some time in a fairly uneventful summer, but as I began to read I soon became utterly enthralled with the story, the characters and the sweeping, encompassing plot. Now coming to the end I find myself so completely impressed by your talent! Truthfully, this story, or rather novel, for that is what it felt like as I read, is the consumate best original fiction I've read that has yet to be published. I believe one hundred percent that with perhaps a little bit of cleaing up as far as a few incongruities and technical errors (very few), this could undoubtedly be published. I also loved how as I read on I could see how your writing went from raw and unpolished, albeit extremely talented; to a highly effective and honed voice that spoke so eloquently and beautifully. I can't wait to read your sequal and hopefully see even more improvement. Best of luck to you in future writing and I hope to one day see 'Queen of Glass' in my local bookstore.
Syl 2008-07-19 ch 50, anon.	abuse"He clip-clopped to her side" => a bit of humour? Anyhow, it made me chuckle even while crying... which is pretty awesome.
PaperWingsFly 2008-07-18 ch 1,	abuseThe most amazing and beautiful story ive ever read! The depth and personalities of the characters felt... so real! The plot couldnt be more interesting! I love it! You should definetly write a book... :D
kagomefreak 2008-07-17 ch 15,	abusethis is actually very intresting thus far. Can't wait to see how the story progresses
JC Delacy 2008-07-17 ch 1,	abuseCool! It's so different and interesting!
chocolatechip 2008-07-15 ch 83,	abuseTHAT was absoloutely phenomenal. Of all the stories I have read, this has been the most captivating of them all. It was extremely well written and surpassed all expectations that I had. Your characters were all very well-formed. The mark of a great author is not the prize-winning books she has written but the attachment she creates between the characters and the readers. and YOU are a superior writer. Although you thank your readers for reviewing and reading, I think that I have more to thank for. You shared an amazing tale that will always touch my heart and forever change what i have thought of Cinderalla and other childhood fairy tales. You not only reminded but also taught me that things are always much more than they appear, down to your very characters and the whole entire story in general. My most favorite chapter of them all was 'Chapter 16: One Final Ball'. It was everything that I had hoped for and more. There was grief, joy, anxiety, confusion, humor, deep sorrow, and so many things that I can not begin to name. It was so well written that the scene was always displayed right before me, in vivid reality. The battle of Peregrinno captured everything within Wendlyn. The goodbye to Raal and Galan was filled with sorrow for me as well, because I had fallen in love with Wendlyn. (but hadn't we all?) I have to commend you on your wonderful ability of creating names. I know, from personal experience how hard it is to find the name that fits a character perfectly, and you did a wonderful job. From Celaena, to Aelin, to Luca, to Roann, to Chaol, to Dorian, to Maeve, to Aedion, to Galan, to Raal, to Joline, to Goldryn, and to Geold, the bald ice sculptor. And i can't shake off the similarity between Dorian's engagement ball with a scene from the swan princess. Although, I dont know if that's where you got your inspiration. I will be eagerly awaiting the next part in an enthralling series. This tale taught me so much about love, fear, courage, unselfishness, forgiveness, and acceptance to name a few. thank you.
Stareyed14 2008-07-14 ch 14, anon.	abusei don't know what to feel about dorian and chaol. I'm so confused. At times I want chaol to end up with Celaena and then next with dorian. ahh!
Nina 2008-07-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseWOW. I got goosebumps just reading the prologue! -stareyed14
aapplesauce 2008-07-13 ch 83, anon.	abuseMy God, I've actually finally finished! I entirely blame this story's greatness for becoming my recent source for procrastination. I have to say that is one of the best stories I have read. It is extremely well written and very well planned. I found it hard to believe that you began to write this at the age of sixteen (If I read correctly)! Although I am currently sixteen, I am yet to learn how to write as well as you. I love the plot, it seems to get better and better every time I read another chapter. I loved how well you were able to express and create so many personalities. You've developed them so well, I began to understand them as a person. I still have no idea how you came up with such a storyline but, if you haven't already been told a hundred times, you should definately try to get this published! I have to mention that from the many stories I have read on fiction press, I have never been bothered to review any one of them before, or commented on anything for that matter. This is just so you know how remarkable I found your story. You must continue writing, you have an amazing talent!
Bigwhoop 2008-07-12 ch 83,	abuseOh. My. God. At the risk of sounding, like an airhead with no life, i am just going to spend, the next 5 minutes titilating with ecstacy. ~1 ~2 ~3 ~4 ~5 Okay, I'm done. I would just really like to congratulate you on this wonderful piece of work. Just brilliant. Of course I'm sad that Aelyn's journey is over, but God it was good. Thank you so much for making these past few weeks worthwhile
Coffee-Cathy 2008-07-12 ch 1,	abuseI have read this entire masterpiece S. J Mass you are the most talented writer i am a book worm and trust me i have read a Lot of books and this is still my favourite by far If you publish this story it will make many many people delighted and happy after i read your book i had dreams about the world in QOG this is the BEST i also loved chaperone btw YOu should get like the NObel literature award Jk rowling is a uneducated child compared to your writing keep it up

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