This was really good. You make a great poet Jessiy. I think a chapter two would be a really cool thing for this one. I think it would be better placed in 'Poetry' than in 'Short Stories though'.
Chow.
renoa 2002-04-06 . chapter 1
tell you what, DONT CHAPTER POEMS! O__O but i love it :> love it love it love it!! *i love Peter!*