I like it!!!

Hey, nice job! Detective stories are hard to pull off convincingly, but you did well. Had to make the bad guy a little bit good though, eh? Please write more stories like this one :-)

Brilliant, very good twist at the end

Nice story, I liked the twist at the end. although i thought you should of had like a super strong girl as the murderer to throw people off.

Paul likee muchee. You write more and theres a big shiny medal in it for you. (Dangles carrot in front of shadowgirl's face)

Keep it up.

I do like it very much. I was kind of hoping that you'd play with the gender of the murderer - something against the profile that Montgomery had created, like a short girlscout that would club their victims with a hammer when they bent over to pick up a box of cookies she would accidentally on purpose drop (hehe, sorry... I'm in a strange mood)
Anyway, loooking forward to the next chapter.

Lowelll