its sweet, but i dont personally like it, first of all it seems a lil too happy and i dont like the rhyming

Short and Sweet :) Very good, once again. May good writings continue to you. Lilah

Mac-

This poem is a little bit sappy. Although, it's message of happiness while living is really good.

this is exactly how i feel about life. i dont think its sappy though, it seems rather happy in a way...well alright so its sappy, but good sappy ;)

Hmm, this reminds me of the poem I can't remember..I think it was something about a weaver and ballad. Sorry, my mind is REALLY gone this morning..I tink it's by St. Vincent Millay, or sommething like that..I like this poem, not cheesy at all!

Pretty! For some reason when I read this poem it makes me think of candy. Probably because it's so sweet!

quite possibly the only poem I've ever read in my entire being that made me smile.

Hi a little sappy...yes but very good...yes

Well, this is my first time ever writing a review for anyone's poems. But I guess I'll just try it out.

Yeah life can be filled with a lot of things, cause you know that there are many opporutinties. And I gotta agree with the bends and life's doubts, I personally know for I seem to always write about life and it's stuff.

I know that there's always happiness that life will bring. But in my opinion, being the supposedly depessive person I am, I'd say that the happier you get, the more depressed you get also. But that's just me.

-Zalei