I feel a sudden need to visit the dentist. I love this poem!! ^_^ "Twinkle twinkle little star, / I'm coming to visit you." That's absolutely adorable! So creative and imaginative; I wrote a poem from a little kid's point of view called "Hero (When I Grow Up...)" that was kinda like this. I think yours is better, though. :) Great work, I love it!! ~MJ

I want to say something, I really do. But I don't think I can say it any better then Kris did. I think I need to go brush my teeth again to ward off the impending cavaties. I really like the ending, though, with "Twinkle twinkle little star," very nice conclusion. ^-^

~lady firemyst

It's so..... so...... CUTE.
I think I'm getting cavaties, its so cute. ^_~