OMG OMG OMG you have GOT to write more! please please please T__T

I'm only on the first chapter but I like it so far...I've decided that I'm going to review...maybe not every chapter but like, every other chapter ok? Just so you know I'm not very good at reviews...

Good tidings, the story is progressing I see. Just keep at it, keep at it the way you've been and you should be fine.

I know how easily one can be distracted from keeping on, but do not be judgmental of you're work, it's very good. Just keep trying to meet and write and I'm sure this'll turn out quite well...

great story. Write more please.

Yay finally a really kewl fantasy to get immersed in, I'm gonna read more now : ) : )

That was really good!! I like it keep it up! oh and tweety should know people HAVE diffrent tastes it's not that hard to know (They also have difrent writing skills) any way...

I'm hard to please! so if I review it's a complement, if I don't like it, I don't review! simple concept, so good job!

(Sorry if I insulted someone, I get carried away :P)

Okay, I HAVE to disagree completely to the last review as well as dispense some serious critic on it. I have to say Tweety that I believe you can not have put much thought into that.

A story is a form of art, like poetry. Endless is just fine, I got the form in my mind very well and I think this story is fantastic. Didn't anyone tell you that stories can be about anything, one of the most famous (well sold) stories I've ever known about was about the incarnations of most extraworldy things as Death, Life, God, Devil, Day, Night and so forth. Do not judge unless you know what you are judging.

As towards the story I congratulate you, up to this point I've read few better fantasy stories on this site and I believe this is something that SHOULD and problably WOULD be published if you tried.

Carry on the good work! I must put special note to the fact that you have exellent humor, the verbal exchanges between Reia and Seth are exellent and you put a very poetic flare to the story. Carry on and please don't be discouraged by negative reviews!!!

This is pretty good. I'd have to say that some things bug me. You really should proof read your stuff. Incorrect verb tensing...stuff like that can help the reader think you don't know what you're doing.
Also, this storyline...gods and stuff...you dudes have obviously seen slayers, and watched the Fifth Element to many times.
Overall, I do like it...but you need to go into more detail with Chara development and Surroundings. Finally, quit trying to fancy up your use of adjectives. You make everything seem so showy, and you use the incorrect words. Like when you speak of Lady o' Death's eyes...endless just ain't the right word. Overwhelming...dark...souless...but hey, whatever. Maybe your writing will improve in time.

This is great! I like the romance.. but that Favriel guy.. I don't think Wyn should be so nice to him. He seems kinda arrogant to me.. but I dunno.

It's good. You should continue