Bwahahahaha! I haven't read this in ages. ^^ Did you say I was Lisa? I'm sure you said that... meanie. You killed my horse. :(
Anywayz, ja ne
Kaiya

Have you ever read a book called "The Rainy Season?" This kind of has the same feel to it, although the two plots are really different.

*claps* I like it! ^_^ Though, I'm insane, so I like the nonsensical pieces you write better. But this is really good, so don't mind what the person with her own personal white jacket and padded cell is saying...

v.good-though it is one of the only ones i understand, i don't get your 'starwars' things. see ya soon........well probably tomorrow...........at school!!!

I like the idea very much, but I would work more on expanding the story. Perhaps have a legend about Lisa that the girls find out about. Or maybe have the sister's portion of the story begin when their parents tell them that they're moving. It'll be a good story if you give it a little more (excuse the expression) flesh. Right now it's just bones and a little spirit. ;^)

Hey, pretty cool, and VERY NORMAL 4 U! Yet familiar. Hey pal, have I read this before (it's Chris by the way). Smell yah later!

i liked it a lot. it was really good. very sad.









especially since it was me that died!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!