|Reviews for Fragility|
| Raining 4/5/02 . chapter 1
Effective ending. Your use of analogies and comparisons is nice, and there's quite a wordly tone here.
| sqeakyclean 4/5/02 . chapter 1
I love your poetry. It's so delicate and meaningful. Often you are wordy, though it can add to the appeal. And this one is heartbreaking. Incidentally, I'm curious to what your school project topic was - that's a very good piece of writing to hand in.