nice poem, i like your way of describing the scene..

-Storm

I haven't the slightest idea how you could enjoy any of my poetry when yours rivals some of the best. I hope someday I'll be able to have an ounce of your talent and be able to compose a descent piece of work. I have all these thoughts bouncing about in my head; but I lack the stability of a sane person to be able to filter them into something able to be read and understood. Feelings alone can't achieve greatness; but when you have the discipline and skill to be able to write something so perfectly and have the feelings screaming to your brain at the same time you have truly succeeded at something amazing. Thank you for your review, I'll be looking for more poetry from you.

This is really cool! I love the picture you painted! I expesially like the last line :)
fantasic!

Eva's in my thoughts and prayers.

talk to ya later!

Gorgeus! Absolutely gorgeus... hehe. Tiptoes a cat, stealthy and black. You hate poetry? Why? you write it so well. Tell Eva I'm praying for her, kay?

A great poem...yea very um...can't find the word for it lol.
P.S. Hope you friend gets well

That was really cool. I am impressed. It's some neato imagery. Are you really scared of heights? (and would you do me a favor and read my poem? no one else will)

Wow! I love deep poems like this. =) It's poems like this that make poetry great! Good job!

KawiiCookie

P.S: And my prayers go out to your friend. =) God bless! ^.^