OMG! This one is my favorite so far! Wow, this one sounds alot like one of my friends. It's really good. There's similiaries btwn them. Remind me to let you read hers sometime.
Hmm.... This is very interesting. I kinda feel this way sometimes. Sometimes I walk through the halls of my school and feel completely out of place. Kind of like no one notices me. Oh well... Very good poem.
you're not alone in your feelings of lonliness. one day someone will walk up beside you, sit down next to you, and tell you how important you are to them. beautiful poem, i like it alot.