It was a good poem in general. One thing I don't understand though is the sun is coming up already? Where do you live? Where I live, it doesn't come up until about five to six anytime.

what can i say other than you really know how to use your words... the lines: i wakeup to find that i am still an empty vessel chasing a ship into the distance will always stay with me... beutiful writing

I love this poem and the descriptive words you use! Lovely!

"little pinpoints that show you the highways are still alive

at night"

That is such a well-thought out, descriptive line! I love the poem...just the feel of it...it is like 3 am...sort of half-there and drifting. This is wonderful! I love your work :).