| Reviews for First One Down |
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The Mushroom Fairy 4/20/07 . chapter 1I read this and though my perception was different at the beginning of the poem, by the end I had visualized a caterpillar wrapping itself up safely inside of a cacoon. Can't wait to see what happens when she becomes a butterfly! |
Yoake Hajime 8/24/02 . chapter 1Kirei...Beautiful work. |
the little death 4/20/02 . chapter 1Wow. you must be me because you write my thoughts like you are thinking them. |
Zels 4/6/02 . chapter 1That's a really nice poem, Shaddy. It's kinda sad, ne? Write another soon. Yeah, the piccy is really pretty too. |