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Reviews For: lizabel
Aelise39
2002-04-06
ch 1, 		abuseThis is a good story, but it's a little unclear at the end (well for me anyways). It was unclear at the end with David and blood, and all...But you're right, you need to develop on Elizabeth. Overall I like the story, and I enjoyed reading it.
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