hope u dont but i like this poem its realistic and opens a book of emotions

Killing will hurt.

...*collects thoughts* thats really good, it sounds great. keep writting, ur great at it

Yay!! an agressive poem!! (they're the best) I'll check if you have some more like this ^^

YAY! ^_^ Go evil things. Aww...I'm so proud of you. *hugs* Keep on doing evil things for me, okay? I need my writing skills back. I think it was all the h/w. Well, maybe I dun really do homework at all...But it's worth a try.

Your enemy,
Dario

that was good and i am kinda confused aobut the bed and the bay about the beginning because you made it soung like a schoo shotting towards the end