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| nonamefornow 2008-06-28 ch 21,  | abuseI know that I'm, like, 5-6 years too late, but I was really itchign to write that, you know? It's probably because of that poll of yours. Please. Please, please, please, please, please,... x10 don't get Sophie and Devon back together. She'd be so much better of with Ryan or Ashton. Devon just doesn't deserve her. He's way too much of a stupid, conceited, cocky idiot. |
| pixilated.x 2008-06-18 ch 32, | abuseTotally ignore what I just said about your updates. Stupid me forgot to check you're homepage. Onto the next story! *does superman pose* |
| pixilated.x 2008-06-18 ch 33, | abuseWhoa, it's been five years since you updated this, but I'd really enjoy knowing what happens between Ashton and Sophie. I love Ashton! :) P.s. You're a wonderful writer. |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI liked this chapter however, the first few paragraphs were a bit boring and pointless. You might wanna spice those up a bit? It was also kind of confusing when you switched from third person to first person. Some people used something to separate a change like that. I liked the ending where he didn't even know her name. That was pretty funny. Good job :) |
| randieskins 2008-06-06 ch 33, | abuseMan.. Awesome story.. I'm moving onto the next one right now! (: |
| reader 2008-06-03 ch 33, anon. | abuseI really liked this story!! But I'm curious...did I miss something or do we not know what happened with Ashton and Marsha? |
| outsidersgirl 2008-05-27 ch 33, | abusea good story |
| cherrypiesizzle 2008-05-18 ch 13, | abuseNo! I love Ashton x) |
| follow the night light 2008-03-21 ch 33, | abused'oh for devon! lol, it'll be so stupid et idiotic for sophie to end up with him yet it seems a little odd that she isn't...but man the whole deal with him and that lisa girl, he deserves nothing but something big and preferably very very HARD needs to be connected to his male genitalia. i hope things will be looking up for Sophie :) she's been through alot...poor character. Maybe you should introduce a new character for sophie's love interest rather than recyling...(i know you really like your characters) but having a fresh hot no-so-arrogant guy come on and treat sophie nicely and mush the fact into Devons face would be nice. OR i could imagine this scenario...yeh...that would be good lol XDD anyhow goodwork! |
| Liz 2008-03-15 ch 20, anon. | abuseThis story is finished, but I'm saying what I'm thinking anyways. Your story isn't good enough to warrant withholding chapters for those readers who WERE reading. I don't even get why you mentioned it- were you hoping other people would review after you were being such a.. yeah? Whatever. I'm stopping reading now. I hope you don't treat those who like your story like that again. They don't deserve it. |
| Carol 2008-02-26 ch 29, anon. | abuseOkay, so i'm totally swept away by Ashton. And I have a crush on Ryan ;] Thanks a lot! I'll never get to meet them either. Sigh. I wish Devon didn't get Sophie! D: Anyways, thanks for the great read Mel! ;] |
| pretitiful 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseYEAH!! i finished the story and it was great! i loved it, i adore, love, ASHTON like so much! he's my fave. character along with ryan, the ending was very sweet. this story was well written and i enjoyed it, great job. =) well... i'm off to read the 'all about you part two' i'll review after i read that one two =) |
| eternal.moonlit.haze 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is very nicely written. I'm glad I have come across your stories. I will definitely keep reading and reviewing! |
| The Mango Tango 2007-10-09 ch 33, | abuseoh crap! that was an awesome story. i repeat AWESOME! haha. :] well i guess this story is...finished? but i don't know i hope it isnt 'cause this story is again...awesome :P |
| Lined.Out 2007-10-05 ch 33, | abuseOH MY GOD. i love Ashton. From the beginning! good job, babe! |