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Cakkie 2002-08-04 . chapter 1
I get it because I've gone though it. One night, as I lay in bed, I look at the stars. They seem to be laughing at me. I cry, as I think of what had happened that day at school. I had made a comment, which I don't remember, and I made my friends mad at me. I sat there not knowing what I had done wrong, as they stood and stared at me, hate reflected in their eyes. I ran, my heart pounding, as they chased me home, their laughter echoing in my head. I ran and didn't look back. When I got home I found it empty as it usauly was. There was no one to there comfert me. I cried for hours until I fell asleep. That night I dremt I was in a meadow and all around me birds were siging. Then suddenly, they stopped. All was quiet as fog replaced all that I had once saw. Darkness was all I saw until I heard voices. They said, "Even when life has turned it's back on you, you shouldn't turn your back on life." Then there was a bright light and I awoke, knowing life had given me another chance.
Dryad 2002-04-21 . chapter 1
hehe for some strange reason even though i don't really get this. i really like it
Damien Buck 2002-04-19 . chapter 1
I'm a real person, eh? I doubt that. I'm a figment of your imagination. Yup... The part that everyone trys to ignore. I finally figured out my poem though. I'm so proud. See ya! And if you haven't already... review!
Dario1 2002-04-08 . chapter 1
Yes. It's true. Those things actually do happen to real people. You. But it reminds me of the preps. Which it is. It does make sense. A little. I'll post things up soon. I dun have 15 more yet X_x Bad me. *hits*

Your enemy,
Dario
SSJSkaterTrunks 2002-04-07 . chapter 1
Woot! I liked this poem! *gives thumbs up*
Kayellelle 2002-04-07 . chapter 1
wow you are sooooo!!!!!!! much better at writing poetry thani am i cannot get the words out but you just go dadada and its an amazing poem grrrri am so jealous
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