call me a sadist; i laughed at the last few lines.

wry humor is what i see in this, i ask for forgiveness if mistakes ( on my part ) were made.

love it, all the same. the poem, i mean.

~chord

well, that was...strange? but interesting at the same time...think I like it. yeah ^^;

I feel the need to wholeheartedly agree

wow thats really a depressing poem and i dont agree. i object!

oh my goodness! that is a beautiful poem! How delightfully dark and sardonic! Iiiii! this is getting added to my favourites list!

TO

Well... I LIKE THIS... however cynical it might be. Hey, cynical is my third middle name. :) Keep this up, but remember to keep the balance between this kinda stuff and WONDERFUL stuff. Egh... hehehe (wink)

as ever:
s p y r e

That's...nice...?
The title and summary really caught my eye. This kind of leaves the reader stunned and blank faced...I didn't really know what to expect, and this is pretty much brutal honesty. The world never seemed to adapt to that very well... well anyhoo, the wham-bam-thank you ma'am style is definatly different. Kudos to going for shock value!
-ali

Very dark. I like. :)

Wow...I read everything you have posted, and (pardon the French) damn! Everthing you've written is just so raw and angry and honest. I really love it. It's just great. Especially Dreamcatcher and Not screaming/outlook lookout. Really awesome stuff. ^_^ And thanks for checking out my story. I appreciate it.

that is extremely pessimistic but i feel that way all the time so i like it