Death to the king, eh? Sounds fun! xD
As always, good story, and can't wait for more. I really like Phox, He's a good character.

Flood me xD
Meliorate Calamity

...'a bookcase filled with books'? Really now? What else would a bookcase be full of?! -_-
lol, but seriously, please don't do that. xD
And pour Phaulkin, I feel bad for him, he wouldn't be alone if I was around, I make friends of people who are alone. Seriously, I meet my best friend in 6th grade, she had no friends what so ever, and I went up to her a few days after school started and told her she was my new friend(she had no choice), and the same weekend I invited her to come over to my place... I did that to almost all my friends. :D

lol, don't mind me
Meliorate Calamity

...lolololololololololololol :D
I'm not sure why, but I found this chapter funny, I think it's cause of the last part 'rendered unconscious'. *-*

heh heh heh,
I'm special.
Meliorate Calamity

I love this story too! ^^ im addicted to your works...AWESOME!^^ PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE ASAP! >< i hate waiting long long periods just to read.. Which i must read for it is too good that i wanna know more...^^ Im rambling... Damn... >< PLEASE UPDATE SOON!^^ DOMO!

I love this story, but this first chapter isn't exactly a beginning worthy of it. It's a little awkward, beginning with the history instead of the characters; also I think 'Gaurd1' ect is a little hackneyed, and Xan can't speak like an Irishman in a universe where they haven't heard of Irishmen. But the rest of the chapters make up for it, sorry I'm too lazy to review all them right now.

I like reading this story...its cute. Can't wait to read more.

I so totally love this. Xan's so adorable. Phaulkin is just so simple. They fit good together. Update soon please?

I love this Story! There are so many good things about it. it's very well written; i don't think i came across one typo, and the descriptions are smooth and visual. Also, I like the pace of your plot. It's not a "go go go" story where the first two chapters you say "well here's the characters and the plan" and then just dive in. You let us get to know the characters, let them develop as the story moves. All of their actions make sense. It's beautiful.

Xan and Phaulkin seem to fit perfectly. I think everyone is right when they say Xan will be good for him. Poor Phaulkin! he's just misunderstood! *pets him* 'tis okay, Xan's here for you now. (lucky Xan)

Anyway, I hope you update soon! (it's been a few months). Looking forward to the next installment!

OOH. YOU. EVIL. XD

You'd better keep going. Or I will most certainly destroy you. Though thank god you restarted it. D:

i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ UPDATE SOON!

heh. go Xan. much loving the twin prince thing. it's fab. i wish to see more of the twin prince thing. and xan. loving xan. especially the accent. m... accent... anyway, as with all of your stories... very very good, lol... flabbergasted Phox... anyway, i really really really like it, and i can't wait to see it updated! well, i really have no choice, so i guess i am waiting. but i enjoyed!

Update please! You have a bad habit of just leaving these stories!

Oh dear GOD! It's been a whole YEAR since you've updated this story! ;_; You make me sad. I never get those happy little emails saying you've updated one story or another anymore. *runs off wailing unhappily at your lack of updates*

You're gonna like, update this someday right? RIGHT?! Because I really like it so far...but its been a few months since an update...YOU MUST UPDATE! okay, I'm done now. >_>

*gasp-a-roonie* This is so good! You have to write more, or I swear by cookies I'll hunt you down!