Reviews for Lost in a Bottomless Ocean

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Yuki 2006-10-09 ch 11, anon.	abuseI love this story too! ^^ im addicted to your works...AWESOME!^^ PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE ASAP! >< i hate waiting long long periods just to read.. Which i must read for it is too good that i wanna know more...^^ Im rambling... Damn... >< PLEASE UPDATE SOON!^^ DOMO!
The Mumbling Sage 2006-09-17 ch 1,	abuseI love this story, but this first chapter isn't exactly a beginning worthy of it. It's a little awkward, beginning with the history instead of the characters; also I think 'Gaurd1' ect is a little hackneyed, and Xan can't speak like an Irishman in a universe where they haven't heard of Irishmen. But the rest of the chapters make up for it, sorry I'm too lazy to review all them right now.
DiamondKing 2006-08-21 ch 11,	abuseI like reading this story...its cute. Can't wait to read more.
Forgotten Raven Goddess 2006-07-19 ch 11,	abuseI so totally love this. Xan's so adorable. Phaulkin is just so simple. They fit good together. Update soon please?
Behind-these-eyes 2005-07-22 ch 10,	abuseI love this Story! There are so many good things about it. it's very well written; i don't think i came across one typo, and the descriptions are smooth and visual. Also, I like the pace of your plot. It's not a "go go go" story where the first two chapters you say "well here's the characters and the plan" and then just dive in. You let us get to know the characters, let them develop as the story moves. All of their actions make sense. It's beautiful. Xan and Phaulkin seem to fit perfectly. I think everyone is right when they say Xan will be good for him. Poor Phaulkin! he's just misunderstood! pets him 'tis okay, Xan's here for you now. (lucky Xan) Anyway, I hope you update soon! (it's been a few months). Looking forward to the next installment!
hupsoonheng 2005-07-20 ch 10,	abuseOOH. YOU. EVIL. XD You'd better keep going. Or I will most certainly destroy you. Though thank god you restarted it. D:
City Lights Burn Like Stars 2005-01-23 ch 3,	abusei like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ UPDATE SOON!
Nikerym 'Ksherea 2005-01-05 ch 3,	abuseheh. go Xan. much loving the twin prince thing. it's fab. i wish to see more of the twin prince thing. and xan. loving xan. especially the accent. m... accent... anyway, as with all of your stories... very very good, lol... flabbergasted Phox... anyway, i really really really like it, and i can't wait to see it updated! well, i really have no choice, so i guess i am waiting. but i enjoyed!
Goldensong 2004-08-25 ch 3,	abuseUpdate please! You have a bad habit of just leaving these stories!
hupsoonheng 2004-08-25 ch 1,	abuseOh dear GOD! It's been a whole YEAR since you've updated this story! ;_; You make me sad. I never get those happy little emails saying you've updated one story or another anymore. runs off wailing unhappily at your lack of updates
Evil-Lackey 2004-04-15 ch 3,	abuseYou're gonna like, update this someday right? RIGHT?! Because I really like it so far...but its been a few months since an update...YOU MUST UPDATE! okay, I'm done now. >_>
Katy Keene 2003-11-07 ch 3,	abusegasp-a-roonie This is so good! You have to write more, or I swear by cookies I'll hunt you down!
SMBug 2003-11-01 ch 3,	abuseMe likie so you writie, ne?
Sinead De Lioncourt 2003-09-09 ch 3,	abuseI LOVE this story! It is so beautifully written, and the storyline is simply delightful! I cannot wait to see more! Please update soon?
Dillon1 2003-08-27 ch 3,	abuseWow. I mean it, man. I mean... damn. The imagery and the pain. I like Xan a hell of a lot, and Phaulken. Phox needs someone to love, maybe then he'll understand. I rather pity him. Awesome. Good enough to be published, even. I'm very looking forward to the next chapter. Dil

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