*gasp-a-roonie* This is so good! You have to write more, or I swear by cookies I'll hunt you down!

Me likie so you writie, ne?

I LOVE this story! It is so beautifully written, and the storyline is simply delightful! I cannot wait to see more! Please update soon?

Wow. I mean it, man. I mean... damn. The imagery and the pain. I like Xan a hell of a lot, and Phaulken. Phox needs someone to love, maybe then he'll understand. I rather pity him.

Awesome. Good enough to be published, even. I'm very looking forward to the next chapter.

Dil

For information please see above, if u r uncapable of doing this, or dont know where to look, please post a new chapter of this lovely fic and im sure it will come again

Thank-You

This is great so far, and funny! Please continue soon, you write so well. But only one thing: Part three on chapter one is a repeat of part two. Just thought you'd like to know.

Hey there

Cool story you've got there

Very good. I love the differences between Phox and Phaulken, and the interplay with Xan, as well as the way they compare their homes. I find myself hoping they'll sneak out and go to Fayela together, if only for a while. Looking forward to the next chapter! Email me when you update?

Dil

I want this updated and i want it updated now! hee hee, its cute! I like how Phaulkin is talking to Xan, something that he doesn't do much. (correct?) anyhoo, good work! :D

hee... i like! more? please? i like all the stuff of yours that i've read... update more, please? _ *hands you a muffin*

Ooooh...why didn't I review sooner? I like this!

Continue please!

I've read a couple of your fics including Catalyst and I'm hoping if i review now It would encourage you to update Catalyst as well 'cause I really like both of these fics.

EEee! Niiiiice. Good use of dialogue. Again, the beginning could flow a lil better. Why do you tease like this? Write MORE!

I want to see how Phox is cut down a bit, the guy definitely has some issues. Oh well, at least Xan has found a nice ally in Phaulkin.

I really hope you decide to continue this story sometime, I would love to read the rest of it as well.

Interesting. Continue.