I cannot understand how Cori sucked and ** Tristan at the same time...
maybe I read it wrong?

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I'm loving this, I've got my baby daughter in my lap so kinda hard to review, just wanted to point out in this chapter you said " first of all, I'm sixteen..." but a few chapters back he was 17? Anyway, this is so cute, Cory must be great at languages, I've been with my boy for 2.5 years and I still can't speak his first language, and Cory learnt Chinese in a year. Must read more...

That was really sweet...^^

I loved this story so much! Tristan is so adorable and Cori is so sweet. And yay Jeremy and Darren love each other! I was so hoping for that to happen. I loved the use of the flowers as names for the chapters too, very cool. There isn't alot to say really, apart from i just really loved this story, and appreciate you writing it vair vair much. =D

I think it's a wonderful story and I love it!

aww... Triscut is so cute! I can tell this is going to be a great story. Very well written from the get go.

oh, dammit. it's like 7 in the morning and my eyes are starting to make the computer screen twitch...

ooh...(why do i suck at writing reviews?? sorry)..cute. i liked the charles weaver thing (that was in this story, right? hope so, otherwise i'll feel like an idiot) so...i'm going to try to finish this before people wake up but i doubt it'll happen, so maybe (and hopefully) i'll get around to finishing this tomorrow night. yay

another story well done! =D hehehe, you like to write about englishmen a lot apparently... not that I mind ;)

Quite a chase in Nicholas from the start of the scene as angry, to finally happy for him/OK about it.

The initial opening was dull, but as the chapter progressed, it got better. I like it.

Aww! how sweet!!

Great!, Awesome!,Fantasic!

Really really great!