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| beloved18 2007-01-23 ch 3,  | abusepurple monkeys ! |
| beloved18 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abusewe |
| Fei 2006-08-04 ch 14, anon. | abuseI'm loving this, I've got my baby daughter in my lap so kinda hard to review, just wanted to point out in this chapter you said " first of all, I'm sixteen..." but a few chapters back he was 17? Anyway, this is so cute, Cory must be great at languages, I've been with my boy for 2.5 years and I still can't speak his first language, and Cory learnt Chinese in a year. Must read more... |
| Prisoner-11 2006-05-17 ch 26, | abuseThat was really sweet...^^ |
| Green Eyed Pixie 2006-04-26 ch 26, | abuseI loved this story so much! Tristan is so adorable and Cori is so sweet. And yay Jeremy and Darren love each other! I was so hoping for that to happen. I loved the use of the flowers as names for the chapters too, very cool. There isn't alot to say really, apart from i just really loved this story, and appreciate you writing it vair vair much. =D |
| Storm December 2006-04-19 ch 26, | abuseI think it's a wonderful story and I love it! |
| jessica 2005-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww... Triscut is so cute! I can tell this is going to be a great story. Very well written from the get go. |
| The Unforgettable Sound 2005-10-29 ch 12, | abuseoh, dammit. it's like 7 in the morning and my eyes are starting to make the computer screen twitch... ooh...(why do i suck at writing reviews?? sorry)..cute. i liked the charles weaver thing (that was in this story, right? hope so, otherwise i'll feel like an idiot) so...i'm going to try to finish this before people wake up but i doubt it'll happen, so maybe (and hopefully) i'll get around to finishing this tomorrow night. yay |
| gothic-writer-13 2005-10-13 ch 26, | abuseanother story well done! =D hehehe, you like to write about englishmen a lot apparently... not that I mind ;) |
| pneumothorax 2005-07-11 ch 5, | abuseQuite a chase in Nicholas from the start of the scene as angry, to finally happy for him/OK about it. |
| pneumothorax 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThe initial opening was dull, but as the chapter progressed, it got better. I like it. |
| mevampiregirl 2005-05-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseAww! how sweet!! |
| mevampiregirl 2005-05-03 ch 5, anon. | abuseGreat!, Awesome!,Fantasic! |
| mevampiregirl 2005-05-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseReally really great! |
| mevampiregirl 2005-05-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseAwesome. and the last part soo funny! |