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april 2007-06-23 . chapter 7
i thought ill let u kno i cant read chaps 1-6
mizbritt 2004-05-22 . chapter 20
Ahh.. I only waited half a decade to read this. :) I enjoyed it and I cannot wait to read more-- SOON! Good luck with the next chapter!
- Brittany
bloodythorns 2003-07-11 . chapter 21
That last chapter was just so gripping. It was so sweet and sad. I hope that you will update soon and hope I get to read more.
Tzipora 2003-07-10 . chapter 21
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING (finally) You better post soon (like the second you get back from vacation) lol
mizbritt 2003-07-10 . chapter 21
OH MY GOD! YOU FREAKIN UPDATED! WO!!

lol! But.. you didn't finish! Ah!! I'm gonna miss nagging you while you're gone.. lol!

I can't wait to read more.. so.. WRITE! (haha!)


*Britt*
Tzipora 2003-03-19 . chapter 20
T hank you for finnaly uploading! That sure took awhile!
Zeina 2003-02-28 . chapter 20
Great story. Just don't kill Amber off, please. I like her, and I don't want her to die. Will she? I hope not.
sisi 2003-02-26 . chapter 20
please let this story have a happy ending, i don't want her to die. if she does i am going to cry. i don't like stories with a sad ending. so if it does please let me know.

o update soon oke?
sapofbks2008 2003-02-25 . chapter 20
I liked what you have of this chapter so far. I loved it. If you have writers block I say don't stress and just wait until it passes you might not like what you write if you write now or you just might lose intrest. I say just wait for it to pass and hope people understand. Because if you stop having fun with the story then you might not write stuff that is good for the story.
Cathy 2003-02-16 . chapter 19
. you know.you could at least TRY to continue ONE of your stories! ER!!
Tzipora 2003-02-07 . chapter 19
Loved the chapter, write more, NOW!!!
you havn't uploaded for soooooo long, although i can't lalk, i havn't gotten 5 reviews yet, so then again, maybe i can tell you to upload
teeheehee
sapofbks2008 2003-02-05 . chapter 19
I loved the chapter. I hope you update soemtime soon you have not updated in a while now. I just found out you had updated looking through the review history like I do sometimes tt see what stories have updated and I have missed. I can't wait for more.
tomboychica 2003-01-19 . chapter 19
hey! wow... its been a really long time since i've read this story, and i still remember it really well! i can't wait to find out what happens!!! ppl will be allowed 2 visit her in the clinic rite? well... brandon seems like such a sweetie, did u model him off of anyone you know...? hehe. well, until next time!
Dawn Symantha Kokoro 2002-12-29 . chapter 19
Heh heh, "We haven't had our turn yet! **whine**" XP Would you like some cheese with that whine, Michael? XP

“Oh, I think three weeks over four months. Well, that’s how long we’ve known, anyway,”

That doesn't make sense to me...**Scratches head**

Amber sighed, pulling her knees up to her chest, wrapping her arms around her legs and resting her chin atop one knee.

Can she do that? Doesn't she have tubes in her arms and stuff? And from personal experience, if you're half awake, you usually can't do much...you can formulate sentences and stuff...but that's about it. Not much moving is involved...

Andrew teased and poked his sister.

She bruises easily, and it would be somewhat painful...so maybe she winces a little but still sticks out her tongue? LoL I love Micheal...XP

...turning the lights out on his way.

There's another woman in the room...is she asleep? How do you know she wants the lights off?

She bent over and tied her shoes, then stood up and headed into the corridor.

How badly was she injured? Describe! It's somewhat confusing! **laughs at Amber's father** Miranda's a duck!!!!!!
hypnotic-babe 2002-12-27 . chapter 19
i luv this story! update soon please!! yeah just an idea, umm u should like make it so that the doctors tell her like an exact day she will probably die, then make it that day that shes with all her friends and then she doesnt die! lol nah dont do that its so corny.....hehe anywho update soon
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