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| Luv and Peace 2007-01-30 ch 1,  | abuseLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL OMG! One of the funniest read ever! You are BRILLIANT! |
| anon 2006-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was awesome. Oh sweet, sweet, seasonal cynicism. |
| rowlings-ghostwriter 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was HILARIOUS! I needed something funny to read after I read "The Apt Pupil" by Steven King, and this hit the spot. |
| Masked Glovemaker 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseGads, what a fantastic seasonal yarn! Let's face it, we've all been in poor Sarah's position at least ONCE in our lives (although maybe not to the extremity of getting arrested). The wry humour and sarcasm was supurb! Truly a modern-day christmas tale! |
| CT Ash 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseHey! Great story, please update. I love your writing style. |
| aphroditeseyes 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is the first story for a long time that's made me laugh out loud. It's very well written...are you planning on continuing this any time? It would be a wicked series... |
| long live paper and scissor... 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful. It's not often that you find an amusing story that is also well written, but this was most definitely worth reading. Keep up the good work. |
| Espers 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was cute. That it's set in New Mexico was pretty cool. The overdramatic birthing scene was a good idea...mind if I borrow it next Christmas? |
| The baava Project 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseBBQ! You are a treasure! I'd forgotten just how hard I had laughed the last time I read something of yours. I realize this piece is old, but I can't help it - I ADORE Jaded Sarah. Hilarious! You've captured that feeling of Christmas quite well. ^_^;; Otherwise, I don't think I could have laughed so much. And though Sarah's POV is the whole purpose of this story, she would be nothing without her counterpart Jane. Jeez, her mother's 'tude exlains a lot. LOL! I love it! I want to read another one . . . ~ LoK P.S. Thank you so much for reviewing my story! |
| cowsgoquack 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuse...Ha!That reminds me of myself on christmas..only I can't drive and i must pay a taxi all the way to the store. |
| nynaeve77 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseHee...I don't have the words to describe how funny this is! *chokes on laughter* You're very, very good at writing humor, which is a gift. I think it's much harder to write humor than drama. |
| Renaisancewench 2004-08-14 ch 1, | abuseTHIS STORY IS FUNNY AS HELL! the beining i think is the best. the opening made me laugh. keep it up this is a great story Cassie |
| Silver and Suchan 2004-06-17 ch 1, | abuseXD That was great! Only thing I saw: "puffy balls dangling from stings" stings should be strings, am I correct? |
| Random Guy 2004-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm sorry, but, no, not funny. Cliched, slow paced, and basicly weak. I'm not trying to be overly critical, but I can't forgive that this didn't even make me crack a single smile. |
| Rae 2004-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseLMAO! I can't believe this only has 11 reviews; this is hilarious! |