i think i really like this one the best, although i haven't read them all yet, but just the ones that appealed to me the most. I really like your poems, suprisingly I don't like alot, but I like yours.
So..getting back to this little "joke" luna >:) Tell me, are you sure that you didn't mean what you and your friend wrote when you cybered? *grins* Yeah...i bet u really wanted that didn't you, why ese would you do that? >:) and...maybe..you have your own "little secret" to tell! Huh?! Do you?! Maybe, secretly you have your own little fantasies? (i still don't know how to spell that -_-') Hm luna? do you? heh heh heh >:)

yo baby, it would do you good to get a little better self esteem you know, casue youre really good at this! one thing; maybe "but" would work in stead of "and"? that only came to mind cause youre sort of saying that you could have had it, BUT you chose something else. you know what im saying? tell me if i got it completely wrong, ok? i love you
your best friend

I loved it...very very good!